


You may walk away from this whole thing a millionaire. Get it on Steam and cash in on your success. Finally, I think you should get a polished final version together and not release anything until its done. Players would never expect it and if it was only once in a blue moon it would work well). Alternatively, Slender could put out his arms and have them stretch out to the player via Mr Fantastic (I know that that would be counter intuitive to the not moving when looked at thing, but that could also be the point. Something like have Slender teleport when the player sees them and whips around to right in front of them, but make it so that the player has a moment to get away.

I think, and this is a must, you should program in events that happen very rarely to freak out players that have played it many times. Or possibly have a child run across the screen and towards the note and/or away from Slender. Maybe have the note make periodic child noises to help the player find them. I think the game needs to work in the missing children somehow. I think you should have one urban, one woods. Anyway, I thought I'd go ahead and be annoying and make some suggestions too. So I finally got to use a computer that can run the game and FINALLY got a chance to play it (I've been creeping for some time).
